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Posted by Susan47 on September 3, 2004, at 20:06:52
...who art in heaven, hallowed be thy name ...
women disappoint you
always have
First mother
then wife and daughter ...
And now, your grandson
a woman who doesn't exist
is to blame for
him wanting
a life.
Posted by Susan47 on September 3, 2004, at 20:16:04
In reply to My Father: Insight:Sorry itturnedinto a poem, posted by Susan47 on September 3, 2004, at 20:06:52
I'm sorry, it was an amateur effort to say the least but it just kind of happened and so I had to do it. I could improve on it. Definitely. There's something wrong with it, it doesn't flow properly. Can you tell I know nada about poetry?
Posted by Shadowplayers721 on September 4, 2004, at 0:16:38
In reply to My Father: Insight:Sorry itturnedinto a poem, posted by Susan47 on September 3, 2004, at 20:06:52
I think it's great that you allowed to fold in this manner. Some things need to be said in this fashion. What matters is that you expressed your message. There is a strong one in the whole thing. You used few words to express a powerful message is in it. That's very creative.
Posted by Susan47 on September 4, 2004, at 23:15:45
In reply to Re: My Father: Insight:Sorry itturnedinto a poem, posted by Shadowplayers721 on September 4, 2004, at 0:16:38
It's interesting to me that reading it the dreaded next day I find it doesn't have the same emotional punch it did when it first came out. Writing it was a really deep emotional experience, way better even than good sex. Ew, I hope it was okay to say that Dr. B.
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